Commute

Screech of the train

People lost in their own worlds

Tapping to music

Reading intensely

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Screech of the train

The man spreader

Thinks he is the alpha male

Annoying those next to him

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Screech of the train

Crammed like cattle

Nowhere to move

Bashed and bumped

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Screech of the train

The frosty couple

Post argument

Unable to make eye contact

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Screech of the train

Lady putting on make up

Rocking and rolling

Trying to keep it neat

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Screech of the train

Cross section of society

Trying to make ends meet

Lost in their own worlds

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Screech of the train

2 thoughts on “Commute

  1. I like your poem. This shows all the things that transpire in the things we do and encounter in our daily lives. Each person handles their life in a different way – some people manage to remain calm (I admire those people).

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